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五年级英语上册期末作文范文篇一：PEP小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评

PEP小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点

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PEP小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评 My English Teacher

Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。

小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。

My Days of the week

I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。

小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。

My Favourite Food

Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is

yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks

like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.

How about you? What’s your favourite food?

【要领点评】

My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。

I can help do housework

I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?

【要领点评】

本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。

小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。

In The Kitchen

This is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。

小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。

My Village

My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!

【要领点评】

本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。

五年级英语上册期末作文范文篇二：【免费下载】PEP小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评

小学英语作文：Traveling

新塍镇中心小学五（2）班 陶弈澄 指导教师 计晓敏

I like traveling very much. I want to go to many beautiful places.

I would like to go to the forest, because I think the forest is the most beautiful in the world. We can take photos, collect leaves, watch insects and pick up some wild flowers in the forest.

I’d like to go to Lakes too, because we can row the boat, go fishing and play with water there.

I also would like to go to the village, because my father told me I can live in the village for a short time in the summer holiday.

But my friend May would like to go to the great wall. She said "One is not a true man unless he comes to the Great Wall."

小学英语作文：Something about Myself

My name is Liu Wen. I'm a twelve-year-old girl. I have two big bright eyes and short black hair. Now I'm studying in grade six of Houxiaohe Primary School.

As I'm the only daughter in my family, my parents love me very much. They don't let me do anything, even tidy up my schoolbag.

I like playing sports, especially basketball. I wish I could play as well as Yao Ming. I study hard and I think I have made more progress than before. After graduation, I hope to go to a good middle school to study so as to repay my parents for their rearing.

My Favourite City

Different people like different cities. I like San Ya best. I hope I can go to San Ya.

San Ya is a city in Hai Nan. It is different from many cities in China. Because there is only one season in San Ya. Do you

know what season it is? It is summer. The temperature in San Ya is very high. So it is hot and warm in San Ya. San Ya is famous for its beaches and coconut trees. You can walk at the beach and swim in the sea. The sea in San Ya is very clean. San Ya is also famous for it's sea food. The sea food in San Ya is very fresh and cheap.

This is my favourite city. I think San Ya is the best place to go in China. I really like San Ya! Do you like it?

小学英语作文：My Classmates

I have many friends in my class. They're lovely and

interesting. I would like to introduce some of them. Alice is very cute. She's also kind to everyone and she's very enthusiastic. She's always ready to help everyone, but she is forgetful. She always forgets to bring her textbooks, but our teachers always forgive her. Ben is the most talkative boy in our class. His

nickname is "chatterbox". He has a great sense of humor and he always makes me laugh. Linda is a quiet student. She is good at every subject but she never shows off. Allen is a very tall boy. He plays basketball very well and he is on our school team. He

often says, "Playing basketball is good for your health". How about your classmates? Do you like them? Try to admire your classmates. You will be happier.

小学英语作文：Introduce Myself

I am a student. I am twelve. I have a happy family. My name is Sophie, I like star, apple ... My mother’s Lois. She likes me and my father ... I have a strong father. His name is Derek. He likes my mother and me ... I have a happy family! I love it!

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。

小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。

My Village

My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!

【要领点评】

本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。

五年级英语上册期末作文范文篇三：五年级上册英语作文

PEP小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评

My English Teacher

Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。同学们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。

My Days of the week

I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。 同学们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。

My Favourite Food

Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.

How about you? What’s your favourite food?

【要领点评】

My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。

I can help do housework

I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?

【要领点评】

本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。

In The Kitchen

This is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。

My Village

My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!

【要领点评】

本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。同学们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。

五年级英语上册期末作文范文篇四：五年级期末英语作文范文

期末考试英语作文

(重点写作主题：天气、饮食习惯、动物、 比较课室、房子和学校等) 主题1：天气

The Weather of Guangzhou

The weather of Guangzhou is very changeable. There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer , autumn and winter. Spring is warm and wet .Summer is hot. Autumn is quite cool. We should wear more clothes. Winter is very cold, but it never snows in Guangzhou. Many people like summer because they can eat ice-cream and swim in the swimming pool. Do you like the weather of Guangzhou ?

Weather Report

Welcome to the weather report. This is Jack. Today is June 29th. It’s Friday. The weather is cloudy and hot. The temperature is from 29 ℃ to 33℃.Don’t forget to take your umbrella. It’s going to rain in the afternoon. That’s all. Have a good day! See you tomorrow!

My Favourite Season

There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. I like summer best. It is from June to August . The

temperature is usually about 30°C. It is usually hot. I can swim and I can eat ice-cream in summer. I like summer best . What season do you like best ?

主题2：饮食习惯

My Eating Habit

A good habit is important for us . My eating habit is good , I think. In the morning, I often have porridge, noodles ,milk and buns for breakfast. At noon, I usually have rice, meat and vegetables for lunch. In the evening, I often have rice, meat, vegetables and soup for dinner. After dinner, I usually eat some fruit . I have four kinds of foods every day. They are meat, fruit-vegetables, cereals and milk foods. I think my eating habit is very good.

My Father’s Eating Habit

A good eating habit is very important. My father has a good eating

habit. In the morning, he has bread and milk for breakfast. At noon, he likes eating noodles for lunch. In the evening, he has rice, vegetables, meat and soup. After dinner, he eats some fruit. My father’s eating habit is very good, I think.

主题3：动物

My Favourite Animals

My favourite animals are blue whales. The blue whales are very cute. The blue whales are the biggest animals in the world. They have a big mouth and a long tail. They can be more than thirty metres long and weigh 150 tons. Some of them have no teeth, so they eat only small fish and plants in water. Blue whales are good at swimming. They swim very fast. They can swim more than 100 kilometres an hour. I like blue whales . Do you like blue whales?

My Favourite Animal

My favourite animal is the dog. It is very cute. It has two big ears. It can run very fast . It likes eating bones. I like it very much.

My favourtite animals

My favourtite animals are crocodiles. They are dangerous animals. They are very big. They have a big mouth and they are ugly. They eat a lot of things. They like eating meat very much. They look lazy. They live in water and on land. They are good at running. They can run quickly for a short time. Do you like them ?

主题4：比较

playground in school B is bigger than in school A. There are more toilets in school B than in school A. There are more teachers in school B than in school A.(注意比较的句子架构即可)

五年级英语上册期末作文范文篇五：五年级英语作文范文

五年级英语作文范文集

My English Teacher

Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.

【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。

小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。

My Days of the week

I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.

【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。 小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。

My Favourite Food

Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much. How about you? What’s your favourite food?

【要领点评】My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。

I can help do housework

I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?

【要领点评】本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。

小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。

In The Kitchen

This is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.

【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。

My Village

My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!

【要领点评】本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。

My house

I am a student now. when I grow up, I want to my own house, a very beautiful house. The house must have two floors. In the house there are many good things that I like, such as a great TV set, a fridge that I can put many delicious food, a big fan, an air conditioner, a computer, and many things that I like. In front the house, there is a swimming pool, behind the house,there is a garden, I can grow flowers and grass.

汉语：现在我是个学生，当我长大的时候，我想拥有自己的房子，一个非常漂亮的房子。 这个房子一定要有两层。在房子里边有许多我喜欢的好东西。比如说一个极好的电视机，一个电冰箱，我可以在里边放许多好吃的食物，一个大电扇，一个空调，一个电脑，还有许多我喜欢的东西。 在房子的前面，有一个游泳池，房子的后边有个花园，我可以种植花和草。

My favourite person

My favourite person is my mother. She is a kind woman. She always friendly to

everybody. My mother is _____(职业）.She works from Monday to Friday, she always very busy. She likes_____（兴趣爱好，记住like后面的动词要加ing）. She always gets up early in the morning，then she cooks nice breakfast for my father and me. She looks after me very well, and if I have some questions in my homework, she will help me. I love my mother very much.

每个人心中都有自己最喜欢的人。你最喜欢谁呢？为什么喜欢她/他呢？请以“My favourite person”为题写一篇小作文。

要求：1、条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。

2、文章不得少于60个单词。

2009-2010第二学期五年级英语作文专练

一、看图，以“My day ”为题，写一篇短文。（至少5句话）

I get up at 6:50 in the morning. I do morning exercises at 7:10. I go to school at 7:30. I have English class at 10:00. I eat dinner at 6:00 in the evening. I do my homework at 7:00. I go to bed at 9:00.This is my day.

二、根据图画提示写几句话，说说你在周末经常或有时做的事情。（至少5句话）

I usually (often) climb mountains on Saturday. I visit my grandparents on Saturday. I go shopping with my mother on Saturday. I play sports on Sunday. I play the piano at home on Sunday, too. Sometimes I take pictures. I like my weekend.

三、请以“My favourite season”为题，从季节、天气、服装、事情等几方面写一篇小短文。（至少5句话）

四、写一写，你所在或你熟悉的一个地方的四季情况。（至少5句话）

There are four sesons in a year. I live in DongGuan City. It’s warm in spring. I (We) can plant trees. It’s hot and sunny in summer. I (We) can swim in the lake (river). In fall, it’s cool and windy. I (We) can fly kite and go hiking (climb mountains) with my friends. In winter, It’s not too cold. I (We) can wear my sweater.

五、写你的生日在哪个季节哪一天，并说出季节的特点，你可以做什么活动 。（至少5句话）

My birthday is March 12th. It’s in spring. It’s warm. The trees are green. I can plant trees. I can fly kites. I can climb mountains with my friends.

六、请写一些你的生日是在哪个月份哪一天？在那天你经常做些什么事情，吃些什么东西，和谁在一起，心情怎样。要求不少于五句话。

My birthday is in June. It’s June 3rd. I often go shopping with my mother. I eat birthday cakes with my parents in the evening. I am happy on my birthday.

七、假如现在是晚上7：30，介绍你一家正在干什么？（至少5句话）

It’s 7:30 in the evening. Everyone is at home. My father is writing an e-mail. My mother is cooking dinner in the kitchen. My brother is doing homework in the study. My sister is watching TV with me in the living room.

八、假如现在是星期天的中午，根据图片，用英语介绍你的家庭成员正在干什么。（至少5句话）

It’s Sunday noon. My mom (mother) is cooking lunch in the kitchen. My dad (father) is writing an e-mail in the study. My sister is drawing pictures. My brother is doing homework. What about me? I am watching TV in the living room. We’re busy.(We’re happy.)

九、看图，写写图中什么地方？这些动物在干什么？（至少5句话） It’s a funny zoo. There are many animals. The lions are fighting. The kangaroo is jumping. The monkeys are swinging. The pandas are climbing trees. They’re so cute.

十、看图，写一写动物园的情景。动物们都在干什么呢？

十一、看图，图中人物在干什么？（至少5句话

十二、假如你和你的几位同学正在教室值日，想想你们各自正在做什么？

十三、今天是你生日，爸爸妈妈带你去了动物园，请告诉我们你看见了什么？它们在做什么？你开心吗？

Today is my birthday. We’re in the zoo. Look! The mother kangaroo is jumping. The baby kangaroo is sleeping. What a big elephant! It’s drinking water near the river. Some pandas are climbing trees. Some pandas are eating bamboos. They’re so cute. Oh, no. The two bears are fighting. The monkeys are swinging in the trees. I’m happy.

五年级英语上册期末作文范文篇六：五年级上册英语作文

五年级上册1-3单元作文复习题(范文)

一、 请用英语介绍你熟悉的一位老师，他（她）是谁，外貌以及性

格特点，不少于5句话。

二． 请用英语介绍你一个星期一至五中最喜欢的一天，写写那天你

有什么课，有什么活动，写写你为什么喜欢那一天，不少于5

句话。

三． 以My weekend 为题，用英语描述一下你的周末活动，不少于

5句话。

四.以My day为题，介绍一下今天星期几？你上什么课？一天三餐吃

什么？

五.根据以下食物图片，说一说你喜不喜欢它们？为什么？

六.请用英语介绍你自己,写写你的外貌以及性格特点,写写你最喜欢

星期几,那天有什么课,写写你最欢的食物和喜欢的原因。（不少于5句

话）

五年级英语上册期末作文范文篇七：五年级上册作文范文

记一次辩论会

今天中午，在五年级六班教室里，举办了一个别开生面的辩论会，当班主任宣布正式开始时：首先，由正方的一辩提出他方观点“开卷有益”，而我是反方的一位成员，也是反方一辩，反方的观点则是：“开卷未必有益”。

然后正方的二辩杨语涵说出了论点，引经据典进行论证。反方的二辩杨雅不甘示弱：列出了三点，首先：书有好坏之分，其次，读书的目的有正邪之别，最后：读书的方法有得当失之差，并列了三个例子。

当正方的三辩提出他的观点时，有些结巴，这似乎被我方的三辩罗元元找到了漏点，于是她以中小学生因学习的压力，而沉迷在那些武侠小说里，所以可以证明“开卷未必有益”。

可是，就在正方的第四辩黄茵佳发话是，她表现非常出色，但反方第四辩钟苓心并没有被这个气势吓倒，钟苓心站起来，总结了反方的观点之后，信心十足地坐下。

下面进行下一个环节。在主席的一声令下。正方的成员便向反方的成员提出问题。就这样一场“口舌之战”拉开了序幕。正方的一辩想我方的二辩提出了一个问题，这似乎并没有难道我方的二辩杨雅，她信心十足地站了起来回答了这个“简单”的问题，接下来就更加精彩了。

终于，到了决胜负的时候了，我们双方都把自己的“杀手锏”拿了出来，在这场激烈的“战争”中，大家都提出了坚定的观点，大家

为了这个观点都费尽了口舌，正反的第一辩邹阳露瑶说：“如果开卷未必有益”那我们从什么地方学到知识呢？正反的第三辩刘加洲说：读书就像往一个水库里加水，只要一直往里头装水才能越来越聪明。反方第一辩也就是我：有的同学看书只是为了得到表扬。并没有细读，许多也只是光看故事情节，不会欣赏书的艺术价值和深刻内涵，所以并未受益。反方第二辩说：书有好坏之分，正邪之别。所以须读好书，但有些同学并不明白这一观点，所以：开卷未必有益。

经过这场辩论会，我们双方打成了平手，但使我们明白了，书有好也有坏，应多读好书，才能使人进步。

20年后回故乡

20年后，我已经在著名的哈佛大学毕业了，并且在美国有了自己的企业。明天就是我老爸的60大寿了，我开着自己的“海、陆、空”汽车，两个小时后，便回到了德阳。由于工作太忙，我已经好久没有回家乡了。到了德阳，我首先来到了我日思夜想的母校—德阳外国语小学。

德外小学旁边的空地，现在已经变成一条条干净、整洁的街道，街道的两旁种满了许多名贵花草，看起来，美丽极了！在学校的附近建起了一座座高大、耸立的公寓。我走进了教学楼，看见里面的台阶现在都变成可以自如上下的电梯，我坐着电梯上了2楼，来到了我以前的3（1）班，发现瓷砖水泥地板，变成了木质地板，教室里已经没有空调了。原来地板是一种可以调温的太阳能地板，而电视、电脑

和黑板“和为一体”，变成既可以看节目，又能在上面写写画画的银光屏黑板。我还从学生们用的“玻璃式课桌”里发现那一本本书，已变成一本本电子书籍。我顺着教学楼的水晶通道，来到了操场，发现跑道是一种新式伸缩式跑道。如果你累了，他会缩短，如果你非常高兴地跑，它就会伸长。而且跑道的旁边还安装了许多健身器材，它们都是电脑型的，只要调好时间和刻度，它就会配合老师或学生做起健身运动。

接下去我来到了小时候老师带我们去春游的地方——“东湖山公园”。发现公园的花草上面有一层透明的薄膜，谁只要想摘花、踩草，这些薄膜上就会长出一些小刺来扎你的手。我还发现，东湖的水变得十分清澈，水面上没有一点垃圾，湖水清澈得可以看见水里的鱼儿在快活的游来游去。东湖旁边还有一些机器人，为人们提供吃、喝的东西。看完景色后，我最想做的事情就是划船，买完票以后，我就上了船。我发现船上有五个按钮，上面的是上键，下面的是往后键，左面的是往左键，右面的是向右键，但中间的是……我按了一下，突然，从我的上空出现一层玻璃，船变成潜水艇，潜入水中，我在船里看见湖里面的一条条小鱼，仿佛自己已经来到了海底世界……

时间不知不觉地过去了，我开着我心爱的“海、陆、空”，向着爸爸妈妈的家驶去……

我是小小推销员

大家好！我是光辉公司派来的推销员，我叫王晨晖，大家可以叫我王推销员。今天我要

向大家我推销的东西是一款新的布式文具盒。这款文具盒呈长方形，宽大约有4厘米长，长大约有17厘米长。想知道它的外观是什么样的吗？那你就跟我走进推销市场吧！

文具盒表面是灰色的，上面有一幅图画，图画的左下脚有一个小天使，他灰色的上衣，背上长有一对银白色的翅膀，头顶上有一个蓝色的太阳镜，旁边有许多的气泡和花朵。那些气泡应该是装载人们伟大梦想的气泡，那个小天使应该是运载梦想将它们飞向浩瀚的蓝天阳光天使。我只能希望人们美好的梦想变成现实吧！

这个文具盒的中间有一个拉链，把它拉开就可以往里面放东西。你可以把勤劳的橡皮哥哥放在里面，把又细又长的铅笔弟弟放在中间，把华丽的钢笔姐姐放在外面，这样搭配就合适了。但你也可一用自己喜爱的方法将这些淘气的文具们合理的搭配。

你们可能会想，那尺子呢？难道它就无家可归了吗？当然有它的“家”了，其实下面也有一个“家”尺子就经常住这里的！把拉链拉开就可以把朴实又文静的尺子妹妹放回“家”了。

你们觉得我介绍的好吗？好就来买呦！

文明只差一步

那天，阳光明媚，鸟语花香，绿荫从中时不时传出鸟儿的鸣叫声。红彤彤的太阳照到身上暖洋洋的。李明和林丽一起走在放学的路上。鹅卵石铺的小路，走上去格外舒服。

离公园不远，有一个精致的垃圾桶。人们都喜欢把垃圾丢进这个垃圾桶里。远远望去，垃圾桶旁边有一堆黑黑的东西。李明和林丽走过去。原来是一些垃圾掉到垃圾桶的外面了。一群苍蝇围着那堆垃圾转，准备吃一顿大餐。李明和林丽的嘴立刻弯成了一座桥。

他们想：是谁干的啊？多么有损路旁的形象啊！这对环境也不好！那个人真没良心！

林丽思考了一下，就对李明说：“李明，你写一张条儿贴在垃圾桶上吧。我负责把这些垃圾扔到垃圾桶里去，好吗？”李明好不犹豫的点点头。说完这些，李明便从书包拿出一张纸和一支笔，就趴在地上开始写。而林丽呢，当然也就用她那玉一样珍贵的小手将垃圾带到他们的“家”垃圾桶！

十分钟后，一切都变得美好了。垃圾桶旁边不再有垃圾。垃圾桶上也贴着一张纸条儿。上面写着：文明只差一步！李明和林丽走远了。垃圾桶身上发出一种微弱的响声。是在向他们表示感谢吗？我想肯定是的！

是啊！文明只差一步！我们生活中也有许多这样的例子。我们只要多留心，就会使大自然更绿更美了！

大自然需要我们来维护！来吧！朋友们！

五年级英语上册期末作文范文篇八：五年级上册英语作文

五年级英语上册期末作文范文篇九：新版PEP五年级英语上册作文

第一单元作文：

1、 运用本单元所学内容，介绍一位你的老师，不少于6句话。

My English Teacher

Miss ______ is my English teacher. She’s tall. She’s young. She’s kind. She’s a nice teacher. I like her.

2、运用本单元所学内容，介绍一位你的同学、朋友，不少于6句话。

My Classmate/ Friend

Hello, I am Sarah/ Mike. I have a new classmate/ friend. She is Amy. She’s tall. She’s kind. I like her.

第二单元作文：

1、运用本单元所学知识，把每天的活动写下来。

On Mondays, I On Tuesdays, I On Wednesdays, I On Thursdays, I On Fridays, I On Saturdays, I On Sundays, I 2、写一写周一到周五你最喜欢哪一天，那天上什么课程，周六和周日你通常分别做什么。要求不少于6句话。语句通顺。

Hello, I am Sarah/ Mike. I like Fridays. We have Chinese, English and PE on Fridays, On Saturdays, I often watch TV. On Sundays, I often do my homework. I am happy everyday.

第三单元作文：

1、运用本单元所学知识，写一写你最喜欢的fruits、food或者drink. 不少于6句话。

My favourite

Hello, I am Sarah/ Mike. My favourite food is beef. It is delicious. It is healthy. I don’t like fish. How about you?

第四单元作文：

1、请先完成表格，然后根据表格内容写一篇介绍自己的小短文，不少于6句话。

Hello, I am Sarah/ Mike. I am 11. I like red. I like beef. I can sing. I can’t swim. I often read books on the weekend.

2、写一写你能做的三件事和不会做的两件事。

Hello, I am Sarah/ Mike. I am helpful at home. I can cook. I can clean my room. I can wash my clothes. But I can’t swim. I can’t play the pipa.

第五单元作文：

1、请用There is , There are 句型来描述你的房间，不少于6句话。 My Bedroom

This is my bedroom. There is a desk in my room. There is a clock above the desk. There is a plant on the desk. There are some books on the desk. I like my room.

第六单元作文：

1、 请用My Village 为题， 写出乡村外貌特征， 不少于6句话。 My Village

This is my village. There is a hill in it. There is a river behind the hill. There is a bridge over the river. There are many trees in my village. I like my village.

2、请用英语描述一下自然公园。要求，表达正确，语句通顺，灵活使用there be和you can see结构，不少于6句话。

The Nature Park

Look, this is a nature park. There is a forest. You can see many trees there. There is a river. There are many flowers beside the river. I like the nature park.

五年级英语上册期末作文范文篇十：5,6年级上册英语作文范文点评

5年级上册英语作文范文点评

My English Teacher

Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all like her.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。

小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。

My Days of the week

I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。

小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。

My Favourite Food

Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much. How about you? What’s your favourite food?

【要领点评】

My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。

I can help do housework

I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?

【要领点评】

本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。

小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。

In The Kitchen

This is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。

小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。

My Village

My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!

【要领点评】

本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。

5年级下册英语作文范文点评

My weekend

There are two days on the weekend, Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday, I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and I often help my mother do some cleaning. On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon. After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents. At that time, we can talk with each other and say something happily. We often have a good time.

【要领点评】

写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动，记叙了周六和周日的上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感受。即：周六上午：舞蹈课→下午：做作业和帮妈妈做清洁→周日上

午：看望祖父母→下午：阅读→晚上：看电视，与父母交流→感受：高兴和愉快。我们还可以选取周六和周日中的几个比较主要的活动来写，先说明什么时间在什么地方由什么人做了什么事，有什么感受。再按照活动顺序把活动内容写清楚，最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感想。

时态：这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写: a.一般过去时（主要描述你上个周末是怎样度过的）;b.一般现在时（主要描述你经常怎样度过周末）;c.一般将来时（主要描述你要怎样过周末）。这里我们来表述平时是如何过周末的，所以采用一般现在时来写。

注意：活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识，eg.（例）起床get up，和新知识，eg. Climb mountains去爬山中的un很容易错写成nu。还要注意不要出现病句，eg. “I often watch TV with my parents.”不要写成 “I often with my parents watch TV .” 词量上控制在50 ~ 80 之间。

My Seasons

We have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spring, the weather is cool and wind, I can fly kites when it’s wind. And I can go hiking with my family when it’s sunny and cool. I like hiking. Summer is hot in the north of China, but it’s not long time. I often go swimming. It can make me healthy and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter comes, it’s often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows, everything is white. We can play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski. And winter is my favourite season, because of the Spring Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature.

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